I noticed something in your story that could be hurting it and turning off readers. A small detail makes a big difference. You can ask what it is: Contact me via Discord {book_sphere}, Telegram (book_sphere01), or email at [email protected].
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to make something unpleasant have less of an effect on someone:
Have an apple - it'll take the edge off your hunger.
His apology took the edge off her anger.